Fred Aiken Writing

Uncomfortable, Confused Morning Commute with an Insane Coworker

antoine, if you’re read this,
then know that i felt uncomfortable with your driving this morning,
weaving in and out of traffic like a moonraker
snorting cocaine
while eating processed sugary food, like Little Debbie’s

not to say that i think this poem will make you stop your reckless driving,
but i still feel it necessary to at least let you know;
it made me uncomfortable

Trite Ideas Lathered in Kerosene, But Still Unseen

loosened threads being pulled through the
ring of fire; covered in kerosene
and lips that spread lies

like grape jelly bouncing off white bread
and piercing through an internal
eternal
inner sanctum

and chants keep spirits going
a debased sense of spirit; lengthened
to the edges of what’s known or knowable

vacuum-sealed and sent off to
be sold in every corner store;
before going on sale
because trite ideas always seem to be expiring

Discount Thoughts on Sale Now

40% off

60% off

on sale now!

act now!

buy one, get one

a melody of signs and sirens beckons

don’t hesitate

the sale might just have started

but it’s sure to end soon

so don’t wait

buy

keep buying

don’t stop

you’re almost finished

keep going….!