Fred Aiken Writing

COFFEE PICKER

Eos blinks again. A pink and yellow hue blankets the sky.

In the soft, dew-mist hours of morning, a hushed urgency stirred him awake. Raul, the seasoned picker with calloused hands and a tired smile, emerged from the tattered canvas tent he called home. The aroma of jasmine and grass filled the air. While the world savored the drink of gods, Raul toiled for its creation, destined to remain anonymous.

The sun broke through the dense foliage, casting a mandala of shadows over the wild fields that seemed to go on forever. Raul joined the steady rhythm of his fellow laborers, each step a choreographed dance between tree and basket. A determined, practiced rhythm developed between the trees as he picked the coffee cherries. A song he heard each morning. The foliage loomed above, casting a perpetual twilight on the workers below.

Through the monotony, Raul’s mind wandered. He dreamed of a life beyond the fields, a life where the toil of harvest was replaced by the joys of harvest. Looking down at his basket of wild rouge, he wondered what the end result would taste like. He contemplated pocketing a few cherries himself, but quickly pushed the thought away since he was paid by the weight of his basket at the end of the day. He could not afford even one cherry to be missing, despite his curiosity.

As the day wore on, Raul’s fingers moved with practiced ease. He moved up the hill, past the mist, further and further into the wild foliage. And then he smiled.

COMMUTE HOME SNACK

melted peanut butter in between two salty crackers,
the heat of the cellophane crinkling in the heat of the car,
as i eat my post-work afternoon snack
while driving home, wondering what i will have for dinner,
knowing it’s probably better than the melting peanut butter
stuck to the roof of my mouth

A QUESTION POSED TO MISTER DORIAN GRAY

i learned from the portrait of dorian gray that it’s best
not to let a mediocre artists paint a portrait of you,
nor let mediocre personalities (including yourself) adore you,
only to be wrapped up in your own ego
to the point where youth and time mean nothing, 
when the superficialities strip away, 
leaving bare
what was never there

though also to that point, 
i wonder what the story of dorian gray would have been like
if rather than a beautiful painting of his youth he kept hidden away,
it was a cartoon caricature?