Fred Aiken Writing

Category: Short Story

A Musical Note

Daily writing prompt
What are you passionate about?

Thomas leaned back in his chair, feeling the worn wood beneath his fingers, and closed his eyes. The morning light filtered through the window, casting a warm, golden miasma across the room, as if trying to gild the world in a fleeting moment of perfection.

This was his sanctuary, where the noise of the city and the weight of responsibilities dissolved into the background. He came here not just for the quiet, though it was part of it, but for the rhythm of it all. The tuning of the strings, the waiting for inspiration, the sudden rush when a melody took shape—all of it a dance as old as time itself.

His passion, however, wasn’t just playing music. It was understanding it, feeling it.

Back in his daily life, Thomas was a teacher, his days filled with the clamor of students and the steady rhythm of the mundane. But here, alone with his thoughts, he could hear the music of life, the subtle symphony that played in the background of every breath he took. It was here that he composed, the melodies rising and falling with his thoughts, the harmonies inspired by the whispers of his memories and the silence of the early morning.

He reached for his guitar, its body worn smooth from years of playing, and strummed a chord. The sound mingled with the creak of the old house and the soft rustle of leaves outside, forming an impromptu duet. Thomas closed his eyes again, letting the notes guide him, each one a stepping stone across a river of memories.

His mind wandered back to his childhood, to the small, dimly lit room where he had first picked up a guitar. His father’s instrument, it had been a portal to another world, a place where he could express the emotions that words failed to capture. His fingers had stumbled at first, but the passion was there, igniting a fire that would burn bright through the years.

Music was his language, a way to connect with the world on a deeper level. It was in the lullabies he played for his daughter, each note a promise of love and protection. It was in the songs he wrote for his wife, capturing the essence of their life together in melodies that spoke of joy, sorrow, and everything in between.

As he played, the sun climbed higher, its light sparkling on the polished wood of the floor like a thousand tiny stars. He thought of his students, the way their faces lit up when they finally grasped a new concept, the pride they felt when they played their first song. Teaching was a part of his passion too, a way to pass on the gift of music, to ignite that same fire in another soul.

A knock on the door interrupted his reverie. He set the guitar aside and stood up, feeling the weight of the moment. With practiced ease, he answered, finding a young boy standing there, clutching a sheet of music with eager eyes. Thomas invited him in, guiding him to the chair by the window where the light was best.

They worked through the notes together, the boy’s initial hesitance giving way to confidence as the melody took shape. Thomas watched, a quiet pride swelling within him. This was his passion, not just for music, but for the act of creation itself, for the ability to take the chaos of the world and transform it into something beautiful.

As the lesson ended, the boy packed up his things, his face glowing with a newfound sense of accomplishment. Thomas watched him go, feeling a sense of fulfillment that words could scarcely capture.

Thomas picked up the guitar again, his fingers finding the chords without thought. The song that emerged was one of contentment, of quiet moments and the simple joys of life, notes that filled the air with daydreams. It was a reflection of his passion, not just for music, but for living a life that resonated with meaning, each note a testament to the things he held dear.

And as the day drew to a close, the room bathed in the soft glow of the setting sun, Thomas carefully placed his guitar back into its worn case that had been a constant companion to every relationship, every move, every change he had made over the years. He went into the dining room to have dinner with his family.

Blistering Summer Eve

Daily writing prompt
What is your favorite season of year? Why?

The summer breeze was a lair, warm and honeyed, masking the sorrow it carried from the nearby fields. Eve stood on the porch of her childhood home, its paint peeling like sunburnt skin, her suitcase a sentinel of her return. She hadn’t been back since the funeral three years ago, and now, here she was, summoned by the invisible string of family obligation and the scent of unfinished business.

Spring had always been her favorite season, a time when the world seemed to unfurl with promise, green and tender and full of potential. But summer held its own gravity, the heat binding her to memories that she’d once tried to bury under layers of urbanity and distance. In summer, everything was exposed, raw and unapologetic, like a scar that never wants to heal.

Eve pushed open the screen door, its hinges protesting, and stepped inside. The house smelled the same—faded lilac potpourri mixed with the faint mustiness of age. Her mother’s presence lingered in the air, an old ghost that still haunted the corners and creaked the floorboards. She dropped her suitcase in the hallway and headed to the kitchen, where the afternoon sun filtered through lace curtains, casting delicate shadows that danced like memories on the linoleum floor.

She found the old percolator on the stove, exactly where it had always been. As she waited for the coffee to brew, she wandered to the back porch, overlooking the garden. Weeds had claimed it, wildflowers interspersed with the remnants of her mother’s roses. Eve’s fingers itched to pull the weeds, to restore order, but she knew that some things were beyond repair.

The garden had always been her sanctuary. Spring brought a laughing riot of colors—daffodils, tulips, and crocuses bursting forth in a symphony of renewal. She’d spend hours here as a child, planting, pruning, and daydreaming under the watchful eye of her mother. Spring was a painter, each stroke a new possibility, a reminder that life began again.

The creak of the floorboards interrupted her reverie. Turning, she saw a man standing in the doorway, his silhouette framed by the dim light of the kitchen. It took a moment for her to recognize him—Jack, the boy who’d lived next door, now grown into a man with the same soulful eyes and a weathered smile.

“Eve,” he said, his voice a mixture of surprise and nostalgia. “I heard you were back.”

She nodded, words escaping her. Jack stepped onto the porch, the screen door snapping shut behind him. They stood there, the silence between them thick with years of unspoken words and missed opportunities.

“Coffee?” she offered, finally finding her voice.

He smiled, a slow, familiar curve of his lips that sent a jolt of something long-forgotten through her. “Sure, why not?”

They sat on the porch steps, steaming mugs in hand, the summer heat wrapping around them like an old, heavy blanket. They talked about everything and nothing, their conversation weaving through the past and present, laughter mingling with the bittersweet undertones of shared history.

As the sun dipped below the horizon, painting the sky with hues of orange and pink, Eve felt the tightness in her chest begin to ease. The garden, once a symbol of loss and neglect, now seemed like a canvas waiting for a new season of care. She realized that summer, with its relentless exposure and honesty, was not her enemy but a reminder that some truths needed to be faced head-on.

Jack’s presence was like a balm, his easy demeanor and familiar smile a bridge to the girl she once was. She found herself wondering what it would be like to stay, to rebuild the garden and maybe, just maybe, herself in the process.

“You know,” she said, looking out at the twilight-soaked garden, “I used to think spring was my favorite season. Everything felt so new, so full of promise.”

Jack looked at her, his eyes soft with understanding. “And now?”

“Now,” she sighed, a small smile tugging at her lips, “I think I’m starting to see the beauty in summer. It’s honest, demanding. It forces you to face things, to let go and grow.”

He nodded, taking a sip of his coffee. “That and they say in a few years we won’t have any seasons. Just one long, interminable summer.” They awkwardly laughed at his apocalyptic climate joke. Though was it even really a joke, she wondered.

As the first stars blinked into existence above them, Eve felt a sense of peace settle in her bones. Summer, with all its brutal clarity, had shown her that coming back didn’t have to mean looking back. It could mean starting over, planting new seeds in the fertile soil of acceptance and moving forward.

And in that moment, with the warmth of the day lingering and the promise of night ahead, Eve knew she was home.

Sage Riverview

Daily writing prompt
What are the most important things needed to live a good life?

Cedric had a reputation in Riverview, a reputation like the fine mist that lingered over the river every morning—always there, always a little mysterious. He was the kind of old man who could be a hundred or just well-worn by time; no one really knew. His cottage sat at the edge of the forest like a forgotten secret, its windows reflecting stories no one had quite pieced together.

Fiona showed up one autumn day, her city clothes out of place among the pine-scented air and cobblestone streets. She had the look of someone running from ghosts—maybe the kind that follow you through crowded streets, whispering all the things you’d rather forget. The townsfolk watched her with a mix of curiosity and the polite indifference that small towns do so well.

“Looking for Cedric,” she said to the barista at the only coffee shop in town. He pointed her toward the forest with a nod, his eyes saying, “Good luck,” in that cryptic small-town way.

The knock on Cedric’s door sounded like an echo of a hundred other knocks, each one seeking something intangible. The door creaked open, revealing Cedric’s face—a landscape of wrinkles and wisdom, eyes sharp and kind.

“You’ve come,” he said, as if he’d been expecting her all along.

Fiona didn’t waste time on pleasantries. “I heard you know the secret to a good life. I need to know it.”

Cedric handed her a list, written in spidery handwriting that seemed as ancient as the man himself: A handful of patience, a dash of kindness, and a pinch of courage. Fiona looked up, questions in her eyes, but Cedric just smiled and gestured for her to start.

The ancient oak in the heart of the forest was her first stop. There, a fox with a coat that shimmered like autumn leaves waited for her. It led her to a pond so still it seemed to hold the secrets of the world.

“Patience,” said the fox, its voice like a whisper on the wind, “is in the stillness. Sit. Listen.”

Fiona sat by the pond, feeling time stretch and bend around her. The water’s surface rippled gently, each wave a silent lesson. Hours slipped by like minutes, and she felt something inside her settle, like a stone sinking softly to the pond’s bed.

In the village square, an old woman struggled with a load too heavy for her frail frame. Fiona, driven by an impulse she didn’t quite understand, took the weight from her. The woman’s gratitude was a warm light in the cool autumn air.

“Kindness,” she said, her voice tinged with wisdom, “is in the giving without asking. You’ve found it already.”

The river’s edge was her final test. Memories of her brother—his laughter, his absence—flooded her mind, almost knocking her off balance. The river was wild, unforgiving, much like the emotions she’d kept dammed up.

With a deep breath, she stepped into the cold water. Each step was a struggle, but she pushed forward, feeling her fears wash away with the current. When she reached the other side, she was shivering but exhilarated. She had discovered her courage.

Back at Cedric’s cottage, she handed over the invisible ingredients. Cedric took her hand, his eyes twinkling with the knowledge she now understood.

“The most important things for a good life,” he said, “are not things at all. They’re inside you.”

Fiona returned to the city, carrying Riverview’s lessons in her heart. Life didn’t get easier, but it became richer, colored by the patience, kindness, and courage she had found. Her story spread, not as a tale of grandeur, but as a quiet reminder of the profound simplicity hidden in everyday moments.

In Riverview, Cedric continued to live as he always had, a keeper of wisdom in a world that often forgot where to look. And somewhere in the city, Fiona lived a life that blossomed, proving that the best secrets are the ones we find within ourselves.