Fred Aiken Writing

Category: Short Story

flat (as a pancake) destinations

Daily writing prompt
Describe your most memorable vacation.

The summer I turned twelve, my parents decided we needed an adventure, something off the beaten path. They chose the desolate, windswept expanse of the Bonneville Salt Flats in Utah, a place where the earth stretched out like a mirror, reflecting the sky’s endless blue. Most kids at school had gone to Disneyland or tropical beaches, but my parents were artists, of a sort, and their idea of a memorable vacation was more… unconventional.

We arrived in our old, beat-up station wagon that still hadn’t been paid off despite being older than me, packed with camping gear and an assortment of art supplies. The landscape was alien, a vast, shimmering white desert that seemed to pulse with a life of its own. The sun hung high, a merciless overseer, casting long, stark shadows that exaggerated every contour of the terrain.

For the first few hours, I was convinced we were lost. My parents, however, were ecstatic. My mother, a painter, saw the endless white as a canvas, while my father, a sculptor, envisioned grand installations that would interact with the horizon. They set up their easels and tools with the enthusiasm of pioneers discovering a new world.

I wandered away, feeling the crunch of salt under my sneakers, the air crisp and dry. The flatness was deceptive. Occasionally, I stumbled upon small pools of brine, their surfaces smooth and glassy, reflecting the sky perfectly. I imagined they were portals to another dimension, places where reality was bent and reshaped.

The first night, we camped under a sky so clear it felt like we were adrift in space. Stars crowded every inch of the sky, and the Milky Way arched overhead like a cosmic bridge. My parents set up a bonfire, and we huddled around it, the flames casting flickering shadows on our faces. My mother sketched by firelight, capturing the surreal landscape on paper, while my father carved small sculptures from the blocks of salt he had brought along.

The next day, we explored further. My parents had planned a series of art projects, but they encouraged me to find my own way to engage with the land. I took my camera, an old film model my dad had given me, and set off on my own.

I spent hours photographing the subtle variations in the landscape—the ripples in the salt where the wind had blown, the tiny crystals that formed intricate patterns, and the distant mountains that framed the horizon like the edges of a grand painting. There was a stillness to the place, a silence so profound it felt like the world had stopped turning. It was in this silence that I felt something shift within me, a sense of peace and wonder I had never experienced before.

One afternoon, I stumbled upon a patch of earth where the salt had cracked and split, revealing the clay beneath. It was here that I decided to create my own art. I spent hours digging and shaping, using the clay to form small sculptures of animals and mythical creatures. I arranged them in a circle, a tiny community in the middle of the vast expanse. When I was done, I stood back and admired my work, feeling a strange sense of accomplishment.

As the days passed, the Salt Flats became our playground and our studio. My parents created their own masterpieces, but it was my little clay village that captured their attention. My father was particularly impressed, and he spent hours photographing it from different angles, capturing the way the light played on the sculptures at various times of the day.

On our last night, we held an impromptu exhibition. We arranged all our artworks around the campsite, lit by the golden glow of the setting sun. My parents’ paintings and sculptures, my photographs, and my clay figures—each piece told a story of our time in this otherworldly place. We invited the few other campers we had encountered to join us, and they walked among our creations, admiring and asking questions. It was a small, intimate gathering, but it felt significant.

As we packed up to leave the next morning, I took one last look at the Salt Flats. I felt a pang of sadness, but also a deep sense of gratitude. This strange, beautiful place had given me more than just a memorable vacation; it had sparked something within me, a desire to see the world through different eyes, to find beauty in the unexpected.

Years later, when people ask about my most memorable vacation, they expect tales of exotic beaches or bustling cities. Instead, I tell them about the Bonneville Salt Flats, a place where the earth meets the sky in an endless tapestry that seems to encompass infinity. I usually don’t get many follow questions about it, though.

light and darkness//the authority of shadows

Daily writing prompt
On what subject(s) are you an authority?

Felix was an authority on the subtle language of shadows. In a world obsessed with light, Felix saw the beauty in the dark spaces that others overlooked. His apartment was filled with sketches of the interplay between light and dark, delicate shades of grey meticulously rendered with charcoal and ink.

Felix’s expertise was not in the common understanding of shadow as merely the absence of light. No, he was a connoisseur of the infinite gradations, the whispered secrets of the dusk, and the profound silence of twilight. He could decipher the mood of a room by the angle of its shadows, predicting human behavior with uncanny accuracy.

In his small studio, Felix conducted his studies. He had an array of lamps and candles, their light sources adjustable to the millimeter. A mannequin stood in the center, draped in various fabrics to observe how different materials absorbed and cast shadows. Every evening, Felix would manipulate the lights, sketching the resulting patterns and noting how the shadows shifted with the faintest change in position.

One day, an art collector named Veronica Sterling visited his studio. She had heard whispers of Felix’s unique talent and was curious to see his work. As she entered, she noticed the room was dim, lit only by the soft glow of a single lamp. Felix greeted her with a nod, gesturing to a chair placed in the middle of the room.

“Please, sit,” he said, adjusting the lamp slightly. Veronica complied, feeling a mix of intrigue and skepticism. Felix began to speak, his voice soft but resonant.

“Shadows reveal what light conceals. They are the true storytellers,” he said, moving around her. “Let me show you.”

He adjusted the lamp, and the room transformed. Shadows danced on the walls, creating intricate patterns that seemed to breathe with life. Veronica watched in amazement as Felix manipulated the light, making the shadows shift and swirl. It was as if the room itself was alive, telling a story through the play of light and dark.

Felix explained the nuances of each shadow, pointing out details that Veronica would have never noticed. “This one here,” he said, indicating a long, slender shadow, “it’s a melancholic whisper, a remnant of a forgotten sorrow.” He moved the lamp again, and the shadow changed shape. “And now, it’s a secret, hidden but yearning to be discovered.”

Veronica was mesmerized. She had never seen shadows in such a way, had never considered their depths and complexities. Felix’s mastery was undeniable, his understanding profound.

As she left his studio, Veronica felt as though she had been given a glimpse into another world, one where shadows spoke and light listened. And in that dimly lit studio, he had shown her the beauty of the unseen, the poetry of the dark.

catching up

The Ferris wheel loomed like a giant sentinel against the dusk, its neon lights slicing through the twilight sky. The carnival was alive with a cacophony of sounds: the relentless chatter of families, the clanging of game bells, the shrill laughter of children. Sophie stood on the outskirts, her senses bombarded by the smell of deep-fried dough and the metallic tang of aging rides. She hadn’t been back to this town in a decade, not since the accident that had shattered her youth.

Now, she was here on a mission. As a fugitive recovery agent for a bail bonds agency, Sophie had seen all kinds of people running from their pasts. But this time, it was different. This time, the fugitive was Jake—a ghost from her own past.

Her eyes scanned the crowd, searching for the familiar face she hadn’t seen in years. She adjusted her jacket, feeling the comforting weight of her badge and gun. Tonight, she was here to bring someone in, not to reminisce.

The crowd’s noise grew louder near the old roller coaster, the one they used to call the “Bone Rattler.” A group of teenagers clustered around a makeshift boxing ring, where a bare-knuckle fight was underway. The crowd’s roars of approval and dismay filled the air, thick with anticipation and sweat.

Sophie pushed her way through the throng, her eyes locked on the ring. In the center, two fighters circled each other, fists up and eyes locked in a primal dance. One of them, a tall, lean figure, moved with a familiar fluidity. Her heart skipped a beat—it was Jake. He hadn’t changed much, just older, more hardened. The last person she expected to find here, but exactly the person she was looking for.

A fist connected with Jake’s jaw, snapping his head back. The crowd erupted, and Sophie moved closer, her hand instinctively going to her hip where her gun rested. Jake staggered but didn’t fall, his eyes fierce as he launched a counter-attack. The scene played out like a gritty drama, each punch a beat in a violent symphony.

The fight ended abruptly when Jake’s opponent hit the ground and didn’t get up. The referee, a burly man with a beer-stained shirt, called the match. Jake stood there, chest heaving, sweat glistening under the harsh lights. The crowd began to disperse, the thrill of the fight giving way to the next spectacle.

Sophie pushed her way to the front, her eyes locked on Jake. 

“Sophie,” he said, his voice rough from exertion. “What are you doing here?”

She didn’t waste any time. “Jake, you know why I’m here. You skipped bail.”

His eyes narrowed, a mix of surprise and defiance. “You’re here to take me in?”

“That’s the job,” she replied, her voice steady. “It doesn’t have to get ugly.”

Jake glanced around, the crowd thinning out, leaving them in a bubble of tension. “You think I’m just gonna go quietly?”

“Depends,” she said, her hand still resting on her gun. “Do you want to make a scene?”

He took a step back, eyes darting, calculating his chances. Sophie tensed, ready for him to bolt. But instead, he laughed, a bitter sound. “Always the tough one, huh, Soph?”

“Always,” she said, taking a step closer. “We can do this the easy way, or the hard way. Your call.”

Jake’s eyes softened for a moment, the defiance fading. “I didn’t do it, you know. The robbery—they’re framing me.”

“Save it for the judge,” she replied, her tone hardening. “I’m not here to debate your innocence.”

He sighed, the fight going out of him. “Fine. Let’s get this over with.”

Sophie nodded, pulling out the handcuffs. She stepped forward, her movements quick and practiced. But just as she reached him, Jake moved. He grabbed her wrist, twisting it, and for a moment, they were locked in a struggle, their past clashing with the present.

“Don’t make this harder than it has to be,” she grunted, trying to free herself.

Jake’s grip tightened, his eyes pleading. “Soph, listen to me. I didn’t do it. You know me.”

Sophie hesitated, the weight of their shared history pressing down on her. In that moment of hesitation, Jake broke free, shoving her back and running into the darkness of the carnival.

“Dammit!” she cursed, taking off after him.

The chase was a blur of flashing lights and dodging bodies. Jake weaved through the crowd with the ease of someone who had been running his whole life. Sophie followed, her determination fueling each step.

They reached the edge of the carnival, where the lights faded and the sounds grew softer. Jake stumbled, his pace slowing, and Sophie tackled him to the ground. They wrestled in the dirt, years of pent-up emotions spilling out in a flurry of fists and shouts.

Finally, Sophie managed to pin him, cuffing his hands behind his back. They both lay there, panting, the night sky stretching endlessly above them.

“Why’d you have to make it so damn difficult?” she muttered, hauling him to his feet.

Jake looked at her, his eyes filled with a mix of anger and resignation. “You wouldn’t have believed me anyway.”

“Maybe not,” she admitted, leading him back towards the carnival lights. “But running didn’t help your case.”

As they walked, the carnival continued its relentless march around them, oblivious to their drama. Sophie felt the weight of her badge and the years of history between them. It wasn’t the reunion she had expected, but it was the one she got.

And as they stepped into the light, Sophie knew that some things would never be the same, but at least they could finally face the future, whatever it might hold.